;hey nice start but i wouldschoose for an more peacefull buildup.find a other beat om af te wisselen and maybe another sound insted of that eighties sounding piew..piewpiew.i like the melody, it has something childish but in a pleasant way.maybe you should leave away the scrath snares sometimes because after awhile you get kinda used to it and it looses its power.but hey,this is realy a good base you've got there.your ideas are often very simple in construction but that gives them their power imo.anyway keep em coming.greets