Wish I could say a lot of good thingz, but here I guess I'll just give some pointers for you to work on.... Claps are to dry, bass + melody tune to Raw. And the cymbals ... no other way to say it ( sorry :( ) ... they're just bad and even annoying ... Hope you'll try and change some things and come back with a bette song mate. Grtz from D-IntoXicated