Crying

worst song I've ever heard

I think J(error) has some issues, this track is totally not bad imo. I'd just would use a different snare and sharpen the sound of it a bit more. But overall nice one. ;)

gasten tis nie omdade zit te posten onder nen naam van een andere dj (die niet op ebel zit), die ietwat een douchegehalte heeft dat jullie iedereen mogen afbreken.... about the song: its ok, not great... breaks are fine, overall its in need of some more soundskulping I asume its one of your first songs you made, and therefore its a good job... keep up

Try adding more cymbals and/or hi-hats. And indeed,the snare is maybe too much pong-sounding...yeah,try that. Nice first (dont bother with first comment,youll allways get good backup from us,as you can see)

Thanks, i try that. Its all new for me and it's not so easy...

listened to ur track again, keep producin' mate! :) In time you'll create killa tracks. Really enjoy your melodic parts! Big up

Hmm yeah I go along with what's been said before. This song needs a lot of editing. But since it's all new to you the best thing for us is to give you some constructive advices. First thing that strikes me, when considering the whole of your song, is your clashing soundpicture. Although that may work fine in some case (e.g. breakcore), in this case it really shows that you still have a lot to learn. Try to work towards a more coherent sound, try to picture it as a painting. It's like you have a blue painting with some black marks on it, if you know what I mean. You need a more coherent palette. Other than that I don't really think this is dnb, it's not because you have a dnb loop that it therefore also qualifies within the genre. You're missing lots of things here, like better percustuff for your beats, a driving bass, some better melodic work. The melodies you use here are quite simple and been used a million times before. Not bad for some filler, but not as a main melody. Also, you have too many breaks/pauzes, and refuse to let the song break loose. So, if you ask my honest opinion, it's indeed not a good song, and not a good production, but I'm sure you got the spirit. Keep on digging, electrobel supports you! We can only hope that in time you will find some helpful tips among all of our comments. Cheerz and good luck hunting!