ok, since you seem to want critical comment from me... here we go ;-) the following is of course just my opinion; *rythm = basic, but just appropriate for this kind of track (so good) *strings and trumps = not good (they sound much to 'easy' for me) *rhodes = main melody is ok, fancy rhodes melodies you put on top are not Ok (they sound too easy, not convincing) also timbre of rhodes is not optimal. *bassline = very very nice one *mastering/mix = as usual in your case this is pretty good. So as you see, I think there are some good elements, combined with bad ones... I think you should focus on a more minimalistic approach of your tracks. Use a very basic structure and don't try to make things too fancy. ... seems my opinion on this track is a little different then the other ebel members here... kr, eddie