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I like the melodies but they sound a bit to artificial imho. Especially the bass is to stale, should be heavier more speaker abusing. indeed some nice skanking would help too. overall cool vibe though
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Dub Water, it's healthier than tap water. Started this out with the bassline, everything else almost formed itself.. I wanted to put some Irie vocals in it, but I'm not blessed with a Jamaican voice I'm afraid :( Anyway, hope you enjoy this song. edit: added some delays and some water! edit: added some reverb and some sounds that probably no one but me will notice, but hey, at least it's now a 320kpbs version ^^
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Djuna
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Djuna
Mmmm not dub eyyy, I dunno, dub can be different.. Oh well, if you like dub there's a chance that you'll like this, it's not deathcore or something like that ^^ Anyways, thanks for the criticism :)
Djuna
@ anonymous 1: huh? Are you my ex or something..? @ second anonymous: thanks!
AnnoM
indeed, some short chops played in a min/maj chord give a very cool extra riddim effect. i think it would brighten up your song. grtz!
AnnoM
cool track, nice sounds and clear mix. maybe add some skanks?
Distreality
nice
magzim
like the water and droplets, the bass needs some work indeed, but its very relaxing and nice.I don't think irie vocals are needed. nice work.
antares
Me likes :) ! I like the vibe! indeed bass could be more upfront, the mix could be a bit better, but still nice! greets
Distreality
i think you should do some remixing... put the bass more upfront, use some more delays and stuff... some good ideas , but still some work i think
Djuna
A'ight, I'll work on that, thanks for the comments ^^