fairytale-kor

ik zei toch dat het het eerste deftig genoeg was, nie dattet supergoe was. en ipv enkel anoniem te bekritiseren kunde mss wa tips geven.... ma soit, al blij dak genen duim omlaag heb gekregen

thanks eeezzee! the melo things is caused by too much reverb, that's wy i was about to master, but ididn't do it eventually :)

you made my day anoniempje ;) i'll pietssj you soon enough :D (and more then once now you asked for it -moehahaha-) ;)

One day, you're gonna make it to the top :)

as i were lying in my bed i had such creeps of the nice fairytale but than came the core and i thought mnei because it was endless and than came the fairytale back and i was suprised by it!! it's a really nice song to sweep away

thanks for the comments, i will consider your advice making my next track. like i said, first one decent enough to post, mostly i get bored with my songs and i never finish them. but i like to see them as an oefening. don't feel like editing or adding stuff to this one, time to move on with something else. to dialekte: got bored with the breakz zo i added a little boenkeboenk stuksken.

not bad not bad... I liker the middle harder part. Sometimes got the feeling that main melo doesn't end too well but good start, keep up!

you have the main melodie,but you should keep the bass line more often. just to fill up the lonelyness of that melodie,weetwel? And should try to put more "bijpassende" elements. Experimenting is key! There is certainly potencial in it. cheerz

yeah good one for a first! the core/amen part is really good! like I said: maybe a kind of atmo as background would make it less empty, but certainly a good start! thumbs up (dus in feite twee thumbs up, ma das vals spelen, dus tblijft op ebel bij enen)

i did not know that cex made hardcore kick hehe ;) i like the melodies but less the beat