Damn man, once again you've given proof of the talent you possess... But I have to agree with Aphone about the mix/mastering, it could be better. Indeed you have to polish the mix, make it cleaner. To tell you the truth, it is a great composition, but a lot of its beauty and wonder is lost in the mix, it sounds a bit over-produced/clipping all over the place. I'm not talking about the harsh sound, but I mean the rough noizy touch there is in general, almost like I'm listening to a song on an old cassette... I think the main problem is that you have to EQ it more, cut down on the low freqs a bit and treble up +6... maybe that could do the job...but then without having it sound too mono of course ;) Some vocals like Bedlam mentioned would be nice too, maybe, you do have the skills for it so why not sing? But it's already a nice trip anyway, a true epic voyage into the void, where I'm dreaming away. Once you get the mastering right, this song will be a masterpiece. Hell, it has all the potential for it, but the mix ruins a lot of it for the moment... And yeah that final part is fucking awesome! Serves well as an outro, it's well thought-out and doesn't need to be longer.