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Needs a lot of work... Take a few days away of this song, listen to some pro dnb and try to listen to your sound with the most objective mind possible. All I can say really, it's pretty obvious it doesnt work imo

i already toke the few days away, and it's like that i want the song

I don't think this track was made to be like drum .. more like fast electro

yea well be it fast electro or hardtek or dnb, I dont think it works as a piece of music, needs lot of work. Just my opinion-

A big mastering will be good ;)