a blue sign

imo you don't have any 'housy' elements. the baseline is more electro or tekno ispired. the organ isn't really groovy, but rather dance and the rythm is a bit to 'un'-house . also the vocal doesn't really fit in the house experience. so you kinda started out with the wrong elements imo. perhaps what you should do is listen to a house track you like, try to copy 1 element in it, and in the proces of doiing that, try to find the vibe of house-tunes. once you got that vibe, forget about the copieng, but just do your own thing :) (at least that is how i started making house-tunes) grtz eddie

Een zeer leuke track, die me aan gospel doet denken...De vergelijking met Moby gaat wel op, imho..... Het ontbreekt alleen een goed middenstuk, ne montée gelijk ze zeggen

greetz gooze aka tallboy, just to let u know that normally u should post commenst in english so everybody can read them, tanx anyway and good to see u here

to fukn much <blue sign> this need some salt& peper,to spicen it up!!its boring