Rabauw
haha Ik koe van you, waar is den tijd ;-) Nogal zwaar he, needs better mastering, beats are overly distorted and your sound is clipping. Put more compression to the song, and balance and clean up your sound. Now for the composition itself: it needs a lot more. I wouldn't really call this dnb, it's far from finished and doesn't really qualify within the genre in my view. Just a guitar playing and some clipping beats over it, that's basically all there's to it. Can't really call this a song, more like a try-out. Try to collect some good ideas, listen to other producers and gather tips and inspiration, and then make a real song. Will check other stuff from you now...