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I like the idea in general but i think it misses atmosphere Try to put extra sounds and or blips When the song hits 1m50 sec's it asks for more trie an upcoming sweep pad or so and give the song from that point much more power.

I agree with FM7, it still misses something...

suggestions: try layering more synth lines with the same notes but with different sounds, a deep phatbass one octave lower then the original, short high bleeps. don't over-use the phased or flanged snare tedede..te..te..te, it goes on through te whole song. Like in your other tracks,I like the melodic sound.

interesting, I agree with the previous comments. I think as producers, we all know it's easy to make a good tune, but it's difficult to hear what's missing. Sometimes a little change in de melody can do miracles. I would bring some variation in the hihats, make them sweep with different pitch ( hmm hard to explain). Anyways, a thump up, because this doesn't sound very common ;)

thanks for the comments, an updated version will follow

woow!!! such a nice melody!!! i can't get it out of my head!!! it's now the 4th time that i listen to it,i love that melo so much!! for the rest, the overall sound needs idd wome work, but you told me that it was only quick-made, so i look over it. the basics are good imho!

nice elektro-ritm !good flange effects

maybe the best ive heard from you...really great