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Nice, very nice but maybe some noisy glitches and frizzels would finish it off. And, for god sake maximize your stuff: you can have twice the loudness it has now. Just get Soundfordge, the presets make it very easy!

i normalized with adobe audition :s

That falls here very good with, I hear it you gère make jom :). I liked it, very smooth. You should sing to it, like soft whispers in the background or so, kind of a farewell message or so, if you're gonna end your live with it :)

nice stuff :))

melodies are cool, would be needed more glitche sounds and beats.

i know these chords,its a song that exist;same order same harmony; not that i'm ocusing you of stealing,i think i've posted something about these situations with fm discution; very good song,but rhythmic ...there's work,a bit too empty; ad some idm noises,but very light ones,michael mayer style,greetz

there are no unlimited chords so it could be coincidence... or mayebe my "onderbewustzijn" has picked up this melody somewhere? i don t know but if you recognise it, just see it as a re-interpretation :) more sophisticated beats will follow!

It's a melody from Nilda Fernandez?? He has a song with exactly the same chords (maybe in another tone)... But it's nice anyway!! There's nothing more to invent in music harmonies since Mozart! ;-) Very nice tune.

i don t know Nilda Fernandez... those who are familiar with my songs know i have made similar melodies, its more work for me to hear what notes somebody else has played than make a melody myself.

Nice but it needs more detail I think. It would spice the song up. Melody is nice by the way: I know you would make something like this, so I doubt it is deliberately stolen!!!