nice clicky drumz! your melody is somewhat uninspiring, though the sound of it is good. you could try to put the melody in a 3/4-loop, so it rolls more (a bit like jeff mills' "growth"). you need to work some more on your mixing also: the base is too silent and the hihats are too loud. use a freq-analyser while you mix, so you can see if there are some freq's too present (though the low freq always need to be more present than the others, because the ear is less sensitive for those). the pad that comes in after 5 min's is good, but you use it too long without any changes; you only have the drums and that pad for about 4 min's. bring in more elements to keep it interesting, otherwise make it shorter. pity that u consider to quit producing, because you have proven your skills in previous work, you just didn't show those skills in this track yet==> work on it ;)