It has some nice sounds! But you should work on the structure a bit, there isn't much of a 'story' in the track.. cheers!
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hi, i think this is a little like what they call 'emo', its very dreamy and melodic. ive already put a version online but there was a technical problem, it took me almost a week to get rid of it hope you like it comments are much appreciated
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It has some nice sounds! But you should work on the structure a bit, there isn't much of a 'story' in the track.. cheers!
thanks, i'll think about it, maybe ill try to make a diffrent version with a story in it
Putting your bass an octave or two lower would make it sound a lot better already. You could maybe build up to a fuller bassline to give your song more structure, do what you want off course. The atmo is good , very positive vibe like your previous song. greetings
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