hi, this is one of your best song i think. it's getting interesting @ 50' , you build something up and then a good booming bass which i like. u used a vocal @ 50'' isn't it? maybe you should work out this vocal a bit more, like you did @ 3'00''. conclusion: there are good pieces in this track, try to use them (for another song) or rearrange them, some day u make something very wonderful!