ok, listening on my crappy laptop-boxes. Lots of stereo going on, I like that. Very weird. I like the overall metallic sound of the track. Also, the voice-derived sounds are cool. But the song is a bit 'flat' in my opinion, it could use a bit more dynamics, some more sounds, maybe a beat, I dunno. (on the other hand, could be the aforementioned crappy boxes too). I'll try to listen again on better boxes later.