you really are gettin productive arn't you ? I liked this one a lot - one of your best tracks in my opinion. What 'I' would do is - try to build up a bit with the strings. create an atmosfear by playing some false accords with the piano near the end (just a thought) and lose the pizicato (didn't like them that much). well that is just something that i would do, but offcourse - the track sounds great without my comments :D nice work