you caught me in a benevolent mood, so i'm listening attentively now. The drums in the first part need some work, they're not original enough to hold up the track together with only a background choir. The second part of the track is much better, the fast drumnbass, and especially when the second pad kicks in i like it. This is indeed a more carefully crafted track than pop my ass, but you should get more action going in the first part of the track, in my opinion