cool stuff, though a bit cliché. I'd do some massive layering and add effects on the breaks. Cose these amens are overused. I'd also detune the bassline a bit, cose now it sounds very kitch, very mono. adding some detuning would give it a more reecy cool vibe. Not too found of the many pauzes between breaks as well. I'd make it more fluent (though thats just a personal remark) but good ideas just lacks some details thumb up