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mantle of love

misstrohan
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last week i saw a fight and it makes me sad, so i made this song... cya

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strekie
strekie

I like it but in my opinion a few simple changes could make this much better. after a while you could go to 4 chords instead of 2. you can make it sound more sad that way. also try to make your piano sound a bit more organic. i guess it is not played on a keyboard. make little variations in note volume and try not to put every note on a bar. when 2 notes are heard they allways come together, if you move 1 note a bit it sounds more piano and less pianosample.

misstrohan
misstrohan

i know, that is one of my problems, i would like to play it live with a keyboard, you can put more feelings in the music. i 'll see if i can change something after those stupid 'examens' thx for the advice strekkie

Kyran
Kyran

Not entirely my style, but very nicely done. The piano melody is good.

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misstrohan

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