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not bad but your bassline isn't what it should be. too many high frequencies, too upfront. i think lowering 1 octave would be one of the solutions, and then proper EQ'ing..
yeah, the bassline needs some work... to me it also sounds a little to dry... doesnt have much character... (and what eckhart said :) ) and i kinda miss a story here...
ok, forgot this: like your lead in at the start of the track :) nice sound and stuff, but also here i think some efx or eq'ing wouldnt be a bad idea