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Iron Dog

benus

This track: deep bassline, melodic, little bit moody. Nothing more to say about it, just listen to it. If you think it's good, or you think it's crap, don't hesitate to let me know. I can handle the shit.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

crolerbedo
crolerbedo
Electrobel Veteran

after listening again, i think your work is good on snares, if they were more powerful, it would be a hindrance to the sensitivity of the melo.. but now i think that hihats are a bit too loud, it's the kind of little thing that must be low, just to sustain the whole

crolerbedo
crolerbedo
Electrobel Veteran

right, and anyway it's not a big "mistake" just a little thing that could be improved ( though it's not disturbing). KEEP WORKING MAN

benus
benus
Electrobel Veteran

Thanks for the comments. It's true the drums can use some more work, but I grew tired of tampering with them, and I just wanted to finish the track, so... And that comment about the 80's tv thing, I actually take that as a compliment :)

benus
benus
Electrobel Veteran

Thanks!

Distreality
Distreality
Electrobel Veteran

i like this a lot

crolerbedo
crolerbedo
Electrobel Veteran

i like the overwhelming bass, very deep and loud...maybe more intensty on the snare ?? and a little acid line would be ok with the mood i think

benus
benus
Electrobel Veteran

I'll give ie a try and see what it gives. I'm not entirely satisfied with some of the hihats, but sometimes you just want to finish the track. Otherwise I would never finish anything.

CruizeOfFiction
CruizeOfFiction
Electrobel Veteran

Good build-up, beats are allright as well. The atmo has got some bits to work on (sounds a bit "kitch") but overal an ok track keep up

SandwichGarnier
SandwichGarnier
Electrobel Veteran

I like the moody thing but your lead synth sound is... hem... makes me think of 80's tv generics! :-) You should change it (unless you like it of course, 'cause you should'nt care of other people's tastes!!!)

Cellmac
Cellmac
Electrobel Veteran

this track reminds about concord dawn the drum edit could use some more work I like the atmo and in my speakers it sounded like a warm bass thumbs up