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a new time has broken out for me;from now on,all my stuff will be posted in ICZ; untill the audiance decide if its finished enough; i decided to delete most of my songs in here, to make a point(even top 10 songs) peops who know me,know my temper,my principes, my humor... it comes with the package,at least i'm not some profile(with his reputation) on a site,i'm a human beeing, thats where most people go wrong; enuff chit chat,here's a old song in a rewire package; structure needs work,but i like to hear from you,what parts were best,so i can loose all the chit chat parts;or whatever is on your mind; be constructive,explecit,be yourselve thx,and remember no skin on a forum makes the forum,its the people on the forum,that makes the forum,greeeetz
There's something of Jah Wooble in your bass track!! I like it !! If u don't know Jah, try to find two of his songs : Betrayal and How Much Are They!
have my doubts about that plucked bass, but I guess without the filtering (though contrast is too big) it would be a bit dull...
hahah,shit>>this is yhe shit,found what tyhe track needed(augmented chord),very subtile now,will upload soon
- bassline - good - piano - still does not sound good to me (to easy) - wahwah - out of tune like kiande said - rythm - better (still not convinced about triangle though.. but that is taste) - rhodes - ok, but you can get more out of it. - trump/sax - does not do it to me - look for a cool sax smp or something because what you are trying will not work (imo). - structure - deep house is more then put layer on layer... you still need to find out how to build up a track without falling in chaos (for some styles you can do it, but not for deep house (yet)) overall - still work to be done. grtz, edd
cool... especially the slide in da bassline get's a sympathy plus!!!!
well,those details(triangle,braeks)comes later,now i have to get the base good,then i build around it,just added it to have some ipresion where i want to go,but it happens to get out of the picture(wanted to make something shaft alike-tv funk tune),so i realy like that triangle to get that feeling bazline is actualy the 1 thing that goes to that picture,just wanted to have a idea, if this sound to sad to make that picture
kick - too punchy bassline - super flute - doesnt sound very good though the melody is allright do something with the enveloppe of the strings... don't know how to say it. the whole picture doesnt seem to match dont like it allthough composition wise it aint that bad. just not my cup of tea
*bassline - very good one * rythm - try a more conventional 4/4 (don't do the double snare, it breaks the rythm to much); don't use the triangle either (imo) *rhodes - melody is not convincing (it sound wrong in this track - the bassline and rythms say energy, and the rhodes say relax - sometimes this contrast is good, but here I don't feel it. Perhaps by reworking the rythms things will be better. * vocal - not convincing me (don't really know why). Any one feedback here? grtz, edd
nice, but too much hats for a calm house-track, i think idd, the quality isn't that good, but why didn't you put it in ICZ?
the double snare thing ... try using it before a break or something, but not all the time like now. i like the rhodes in it... i agree with the vocals though, don't feel right.