scream of despair

ZARk

Electrobel Veteran

2008-06-16 22:00:00

1/ The screams are too loud 2/ Kick is too saturated 3/ The notes at 1:30 are atonal (off-key) 4/ song is a bit long with the elements you have, could use some vocals or something on top. Hope that helps. Good start though

Vikthor

Electrobel Veteran

2008-06-16 22:00:00

Yours tracks are very nice , this one and deception sentimentale. But on this one, there is a piano at the middle of song wich is not very nice ;) but the piano at the end is good ! Bravo !

Vikthor

Electrobel Veteran

2008-07-08 22:00:00

Very good sond, little sad but I like that ;) Like your last one