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color of your eyes
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a small intimate song (acoustic guitar and vocal) - a one-time recording - hence the minor picking-errors... composed and written yesterday afternoon, on the terrasse in the sun (10 feb) - wanted it uncut to have the genuine touch (but does need some post-editing) Lyrics: I used to think that eyes were cold they shoot you down I've been told green are the ones that leave you a frown brown are the ones that just leave town to see the country to see the sea they see it all but not with me they go to places I don't go they go to parties I never show grey are the ones that go away blue are the ones that never never ever stay they see the sunshine everyday I face the clouds that won't move away They like the hunt just for the kill I have to climb the highest hill So what's the color of your eyes? What's the scent of your thighs So what's the color of your eyes? I want to see them see them smile So what's the color of your eyes?
Well, It's fine to see you've chosen an acoustic way for now. It's always a pleasure to listen. Did you record it with in a single shot ? Something I'd change : First, at the end of each sentence, your voice sounds tired, It's maybe a wanted effect but repetition of the same tone make the sentence go down, like for "told" in your song. You could probably add another track of your voice with a "Mmmm" melody" to create some variations ? It should be nice. Of try to add a vibrato in your main voice (hu... good luck héhé)
well, I've posted it in ICZ because it is a one-take recording with just minor reverb on both guitar and vocal. I'm going to rework this with seperate recording of vocal and guitar, with some humming here and there and a break. My goal is to have some simple rythmclicking here and there but it's a skill I don't have yet. (And my playing isn't all that temposynced yet...)
Splendid song, exceptionnal, i like it very much. For me, nothing to say.... just : grett ! Go on
Really good! Lyrics are nice greets
thx Antares wickzzz or varanof, why a thumb down? What should change, what isn't good? I'm not against a thumb down but I'd like a word of explanation... something I could take in consideration.
Wonderfull man... Really... Your lyrics made my mind wander off... Definetly thumb up! Music straight from the heart... Hats off!
The voice is well recorded, thumb up for that already, how do you record them that clean? Nice song, not what i'd listen to but it reminds me of some good artists in the genre. :)
I've got the H2 recorder from ZOOM... not very cheap (198euro) but I read so many good reviews I couldn't resist... and to me it's worth the investment.
nice.....pm me for the future version....