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rule001

...one for my lovely wife. (still needs lots of work) I still have to ad some breaks and vocals, but i really want to get this one right.... so... any tips? also on wich genre to put it in. (btw, all live synth) edit: second try, whitout guitars

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

mrfrendo
mrfrendo
Electrobel Veteran

hEY BIG THUMBS UP.. LOVING THE MELODY WOULD MOS DEF TURN THE BEAT UP THO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK...:-)

Distreality
Distreality
Electrobel Veteran

better allready...^^

marcel1948
marcel1948
Electrobel Veteran

Very nice sound!Just lower the bass drum volume a bit (I mean A BIT) and keep the rest like it is...a new Moby is born....

DeHomunculus
DeHomunculus
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wonderful mate. realy relaxing. thumbs up!

rule001
rule001
Electrobel Veteran

that sound at 1.25 is an electric guitar with heeps of overdrive and distortion. I was kinda going for that typical '80's-rock-balad-way-to-slow to-be-a-guitar-solo' thingy. :) I'm trying a version where i replace them with bagpipes or irish flute. ('Enya-like' background vocals will be added once i find a good voice ;) ) still a lot of work, so keep comments and suggestions comming 8)

rule001
rule001
Electrobel Veteran

cheers for the nice (and helpfull) comments. All the best for 2007 (...and keep m comming ;) )

Bedlam
Bedlam
Electrobel Veteran

ok this might be long ! I'd rework some of the guitar melody, the sample fits well but 1 or 2 of the melodies are not as they should be or how my ear expects it anyway :) I'd also try not to put string everywhere in the track, and especially in the beggining try to make them more realistic (maybe by adding some attack and release, it always helps). If you want to make it into a song, i'd also try putting more of a storyline to the song. right now it stays on the main sequence all song long, i'd add an apogée (i dunno the word in english) but an explosive part followed by a dramatic ending. Like all in all the song has to be in a verse chorus bridge kinda structure, right now the is only verse and maybe bridge. :) There ! hope this help ! it's very very much better than your older work ! happy to see you are developing your skills :) Cheers !

transynth
transynth
Electrobel Veteran

yea nice work, the bassdrum is eaten by the rest of the sounds, but hey that's no big change :) great melodic work mate! Grtz!

Distreality
Distreality
Electrobel Veteran

compo is good... - i would add more punch to the kick - lower the bass in the kick a bit - get the snares(and rhytm in general) more upfront - change the sound that comes in at 1:28 - add some elays on the snares here and there Imo these are the main points to focuss on... It has a lot of potential, big up

orfeo
orfeo
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great melody.i like tha pads you use.Very melancolic.good 2007