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nice noises and very nice textures, but some sounds are too repetitive. Also there is not enough dimension in the song. It sounds like you've made 3-4 songs with some overlapping fragments. You should try to interweave the different layers in a coherent way and make the layers evolve coz it sounds like the song is going nowhere and that makes it dull to listen to. I know, that's easier said than done (wouldnt be able to pull it of myself) ;)