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my first completed reason song... hope to get some feedback on it
Get some stereo in there! Everything sounds pretty mono and dull. Try to EQ things to make those sounds more interesting ( there's no bass nor hi in there, only mids ), and try to make the whole thing stick together more, instead of just separate samples played in a certain order. It's not like your ideas are bad, it's just they're not worked out enough i think. But hey, that's just my opinion of course, nobody forces you to listen to it :)
catchy melody! It's cool how you combine a smooth melody with a punchy beat but it's like i expect the song to start with a more rolling beat. Greetz