mrMute
I like the sounds, especially the melo that starts at 0:55 it makes the sound fuller and makes the track lift-off, maybe you can add some subtle filtering to it to give it some "waaaoooaaa" :) or ad a second layer to it one octave higher and use it as a lead. you made one build-up from start till ending. If you would re-organise the track with some breaks and work somewhat in chorus/vers style it would make the track better. grtz