The Grasshopper

smooth, melodic, could use some extra attention in the rhythm department.

Yep, like the idea! Not my favorite style, but nevertheless a good production imho! Grtz

Always Good Music with you !!! Never discosted !!! + 1 !!!

Nice tip! Thanx cestqui. Guess I forgot to mix it again after adjusting. I'll work on it in my holliday, starting monday! Thanx everybody for the comments and tips.

all right, melodies are really well put together! Maybe it's not relevant (too much my subjective opinion), but the rhythm isn't really 'dynamic'... the clap is stompin' through the whole track and those hihats give too little extra movement. What i want to say is: i cant dance this melodies with only those rhythmic parts.... Greetz & thumbs up

Carbura, you've created a good flow, nice clean sounds, nothing too much or too few... well proportionned. Nice work

Nice! Good choice of sounds. Simple and professional.

Wooooow! Yes! This is amazing! This is the perfect summer electro track! I luv it, damn man this is great! The end of the song is a bit of a sudden death, but still, awesome track! Great bass, funky tunes, pro-stuff! Added to my favourites.

nice,sweet -warm sound,good dynamics structure is kind of strange,at 1min40 there's a cymbalhit,but no changes afterwards,i founded a bit empty there,and later ,it changes a bit too much, much sounds are introduced at once,but the melochanges themselve are realy great this is may be your 1ste real good track for me,a break can do great things luv it,i'm curious about your next aproach,only some details that i mensioned,the base of the track is there,and good!! greeeetz

You 're tooo kind. Thanx.