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did ya find that cow ,at the corner of my house?? good job,nice sound,only a bit weak in dynamics,and a very low mix i realy like it after the break,rminds me at some bass xl party's oh yeah,people,help this guy on his way,and motivate him,with some comments he's new in here,but not where i come from now the realy bad part>>mp3 noise in that vocal,use our micro and the end is abrupt,and sucky sucky well,up the next cow,i did some cowing myself,greetz

thx for the comments cestqui!info i forgot to give : the track is made by me and tentacle and i reworked it e little and its e bit mastered by herbal j welknown as zjwief here on the baord! ok more comments welcome 1thing : i had to place this track in under construction but did wrong sry

First track I heared from you, i like the beats you made, but i don't find the melody catchy, maybe you should add a background melody/strings. I do like the build up and the 2nd drop. Hope to hear more from you

indeed, needs more dynamics... get that rave sound more upfront, for inspiration check panacea... good