ZARk
now this is really good. great construction work .. getting it to build up like that ... quite original... ur 'main loop' is really nice, maybe too much, because you seem to over-use it ... making it loop for over a minute ... (refering to the end here) that kinda spoils the track i think. either cut it down from 4:32 to something like 3:32 and fix add some more events just before the last 'speech' and you got yourself something really good .. basically, try to cut down the repetivness in the last half ..