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nice sounds!!

Really nice composition and variations, very Depeche Mode inspired musically. I don't really like the vocals, it sounds as if you wanted to make a charicature of the track, which is a pity cuz pure musically it really is good. Agree with HarryPoppins, the sounds are nice. Maybe keep the snares in the center, basses are nice, melodies too. Lots of variations but I don't get the impression of an overlead, so nicely done. But the vocals...my man do something about them.

i like it, keep it up !!

loud sound at the beginning. i see it more progressive with a crescendo. yeah yahourt lyrics sound weirdo. but you have a nice voice. keep it up and make something with sense ;).

good emo!

nice!