Dezma
hi, you should ease up a little with the reverb :) As a rule it's not that wise to use it on kick and bass. Mixing could use some improvement also, after the break the drums are too much on the background. Melody has potention but I think there are a lot of ways to improve the song. Add some drums, listen to commercial released songs and hear the difference, there are too much mid's in your mix. You might think after this comment I don't like the song, but in fact I do, there's just a lot of work to do. Keep the pad as it's a very nice sound !