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try making a deeper bassline, with a nice melody on top, your melody sounds a bit chaotic, don't like it that much. phatter bassdrum will also help you a lot i'm sure ;) keep up
Kick souds a bit loud. Lots of variation. Like the chaos.
Sadly my comp crashed and I lost all files :P The kick was ripped from Infected Mushroom I'm the supervisor so I'm a bit surprised you find it not phatt enough, but since the audio engine was Reason's I can understand why the phatness was gone, coz this engine is not good sounding.