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...right? edit : minor changes at the end

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HarryPoppins
HarryPoppins

nice one!

Distreality
Distreality

very nice ! love it

crolerbedo
crolerbedo

nice sad song, but well, imo your singing (which is nice) could sound a bit more confident if you were singing in french ??? Or work that french accent a bit ;) Ow yeah and the guitar is really beautiful, did you play it yourself ??

SandwichGarnier
SandwichGarnier

big up! really nice athmos!

dontwakemeup
dontwakemeup

crolerbedo : yeah, the guitar is played by the guy singing (which is not me but my accent is WORSE). your suggestion is good but languages are always difficult issues... for the moment, we feel it in english... french sounds soooo... french! :) edit : by the way, thank you everybody for such nice comments

Distreality
Distreality

lovin it...

crolerbedo
crolerbedo

yep like it so much... Maybe put the voice a bit louder, and add some reverb (to make it deeper) and some delays once in a while... Very nice and melancholic...

eckhart
eckhart

very good. entrancing, allmost sjamanic in a Tool kinda way, but softer ofcourse :) .. couldnt understand all of the lyrics.. good beats too

Rabauw
Rabauw

Wooooowowowoowww! Fabulous! In the same vein as Terminus Lips and yes, I like that A LOT! Already from the very first note, I knew I was gonna love this. I like the sweet singing, but maybe some extra reverb on the passage "i'm a voodoo doll" would be nice. Also on some other parts more reverb or some vocal fx could have the vocals sound colder/more eerie, I think that would fit this song just nicely. I really appreciate how you guys always make such interesting pieces of music with relatively spoken easy chords/melodies. That's in fact not an easy task to stand out that way. The bells at the end give it once again a dramatic touch and the increasing structure/tension is well-built. Thuuuuumbs uuuuuuup!

arnaud
arnaud

Buildup is a bit too slow and repetitive. The only variation in the first fart is the vocals but I need to really consentrate on them to make out what they are all about. The endpart is a good and welcome "climax" tho.

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