the sound is not good but i like the song.it's original imo.your sound should come more to the front compression/limiting should be better because now it sounds like the it's broken(sounds like distortion on the whole mix), kick could use some more attack high freqs(make it more wet is what i'm trying to say).panning! leave your beat panned in the middle but pan yer melodies right and left.bassline in the middle.compress your beats together.put limitter on yer bassline cus some notes will always jump out(they sound louder and will push away elements when you're limiting on the masterchannel). since this is a icz i sincerly hope it will turn out good sounding, would be a shame , a nice song like this with a bad sound :).hope it'll help you and hope i didn't sound to cocky wich ain't my intention.cheers