sorry to say it in flemish,>>miljair!!!!!!!! ,to overloaded in your break-sequence use your velocety's,to have a natural descend(of volume),you will hurt someones speakers <incl yours try to mix more mid tones into those tombs as for composition>> its fancy,nice work,i'm not into elektro influences that much ,for some exeptions,like this one and remeber,bompbastic ,means not loud,but get it loud,and its bombastic in its way,honor your name >>dynamic,get more dynamic,lolz keep it up ,greetz