Rabauw
Good things: your sound spectrum and selection/development of main synths. Background layers are cool too. The part with the heavy kick around the middle is interesting too. Negative: the song is very generic, and as far as this it won't stand out from others. The standard clap probably comes directly out of a soundbank and I personally dislike standard percussion, so try to give it a touch of your own. Overall: you've got the right idea for this one, and definitely the right sound, but the composition itself leaves much to be desired, in terms of structure and chord transitions.