BunZer0
Not sure if this track is in the good section.. For me it sounds more electro than anythig else, with noises and saturations of course, but electro imho... I think your track should be improved with a big fat bass in order to also work on low frequencices... Everythin is now situated in the middle and treble range... So your abrassive track need to be on a basis, with a bass ;-)