there are very good parts in your track :) things i really like... but doesn't like the intro that much... it's to hollow... fill it up with some atmo sounds or stuff... but i like the second drop much bettah than the first 1 !! i would work further with the second drop piece and leave the first drop part... first drop remindes me more to some clownstep shizzle... 2nd part more to dark rollers ;) but i don't know what ur up to ;) friendly regards,