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yeah , so it was an attempt at a short song ( only 5 mins this is the shortest i ever created :P) so anyway i made it to get some comment on the entire build up and shit of my songs, i know it lacks a basic plan, that's why i'm asking your help :) maybe also to much distortion?
There is never too much distorstion, and you should increase the sound density, some parts are too simple, for example add some mad snares and synths. but it's a good beginning.
what he ^ said, add some more elements in your breaks and more synths for a more complete feeling, you know, filling up some empty parts. disto is good, like it harsh. and some structural elements are real good = thumb up