This song reminds me of Hot Butter's Pop Corn... Don't ask me why, surely the lead sound at the very beginning. Well, what else to say ? At the very least it's not annoying, there are a lot of evolutions all along the track, maybe you should build something more coherent... or maybe not ! In my opinion, I prefer the first part, and the last part of the sound, which reminds me some Plaid tracks. And yes, I've been writing this comment when listening to the song, so maybe it's a bit messy :-)