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dnb beats ,cutz & big guitarz I hope you enjoy it
a good concept but quite monotone imo try variating your breaks more (yes you do it, but only very little), try inserting other breaks here & there, rearange the loops further add more elements besides the guitar for insperation check out: -Drumcorps (more breakcore then dnb tho) -bazooka (one of the first to combine hardhitting dnb with metal on his label aural carnage) -enduser (I think he made 1 metal/dnb track for some soundtrack) -pendulum (but those guitars sound cheesy/poppy, not my thing but they also add guitars so worth mentioning) cheers
very nice riffs and beat work but more elements and breaks would indeed be very useful. (will be hard though, those fat guitares eat up a lot of musical space) but if you can add those extra spices this could turn out real nice strange unfitting outro imo (sample?) I would drop that, go out with a bang.