Broken dreams in Neverland

Great track to join ebel Lot's of emotions on this one But as rabauw and other members said You need to polish your mastering But great for a newcomer and certainly in this kind of music style want to hear more of this kind of music

rough unpollished diamond, with a nasty cut near the end. in other words: I agree with the others here. I'm staying tuned to here more!

Very soundtracky :)) yep them strings... But really nice! (made it with edirol orchestra?) I love the ending!

damn where all those chicks come from??? :) i enjoyed it all the way...it was sad when it finished :(

Woow It reminds me of 1492 conquest of paradise (vangelis) i really like this kind of emotion (not olmost but totally) do i hear choer chant on the background ? congrats 4 this one, welldone

dito ! ;)

nice end !

realy nice theme!! I like to ear more!!!

Well, let me be the first one to comment here and welcome you at Ebel! ;) This is, in general, great, for a first upload. Really a wonderful piece of music, very smooth, almost emotional. As for the sound quality: it's dense, but I think it's a bit too dense. I mean, I'm listening through headphones, and as wonderful as the composition may be, production-wise it comes off with a harsh edge, it sounds rather muffled. So, I think you can clean this up, production-wise. Playing it loud does not always mean it will sound better. You need to find the perfect sound balance, without a risk of audio clipping. So, I'd suggest to lower some volumes here and there. Second, the strings sound a bit too fake in my opinion. Probably also because of the loudness, but some different reverb settings might also help. And third, I wouldn't have the strings stop so suddenly for the bells. But, in all, this is a splendid opener. Seems like we can expect some nice compositions from you, so keep it up!

It's really difficult to make this kind of music using software...Rabauw spoke wise words again: composition-wise it's really great, although it should 'die' more, do not give up the strings immediately...and production-wise, well, I'm not gonna repeat Rabauw's words ;) , it's a bit loud. And you officially gained my jealousy :)