the end is unsatisfying, it sounded like you didnt want to want to waiste any energy with making a good ending. I love the rythm and beats/percussion pattern, but I found them inappropriate in combination with the spooky voice and melodies ...I know that's very subjective. Overall the production is good, ony emotionally I'm left unsatisfied, not knowing what to feel in this song....a spider queen in a forgotten pyramid? I find the beats are too groovy for that.