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phew very nice and addictive bass. breaks are definitly waaaay better! thumbs up.

A sweet oriental female vocal would fit excellent...Could use a stop somewhere in the middle somehow...Dunno how to put it...It goes up & kinda stays that way for a while...maybe some more variation would benefit that..Anyhow..I hear an excellent composition/idea that is as good as finished, but not all the way ( I know, I'm splitting hairs here ;) )...Could become a super lounge track! And I totally see this work'n as a score, so...Great work!

i didnt find it so repetitiv, i like the melos, about the breaks, yea maybe could get some more work, maybe a bit of reverb sometimes,and more variation..

to me, some reversed sounds always do the trick, like the rythm a lot, nice guitar melo - sounds a little like a young-metallica-acoustic... move to soundtrack isn't bad, anything fits here... you said... i'm gonna sing on it...? maybe i'm a little deaf here but i didn't hear you... i guess it's a future-version-plan? too bad the end is not worked out as it should with some slow, hesitating final piano-notes.

great work... sounds very kosher !! nothing to remark ... doesnt fit dnb ..ull get more aprouval from listeners in an other section like contemporary or sound track ..could match a film without any problem ... big up for ur dad :))

I love the beginning of the song, after its also good but being a bit more repetitive ... but nice one, cheers

thanks bram!! , reaman i must say i like the idea of slow notes at the end coooooooool i'll give it a go ! for the vocal well i'm finding hard not to damgage the tune with the vocal , but i am still trying!

i like the fact your dad played the guitar. The violin and bass mix very well with the guitar. Not very sure about the breaks. But high potential! just needs some work.

nice one...

nice comosition,but check out the picture i aded,in topic..mixingit stays like this for the intire song,in red,it should go up and down... but again,its superb compo,cheers