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Wipe those tears girl

particle

I have the feeling this is not finished... Any comments?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Akwalek
Akwalek
Electrobel Veteran

is eentje da ik gemist heb, great , something else for a change...how you did you make this one? also in reason :o ?...anyways, i really enjoyed it....

Doorchaser
Doorchaser
Electrobel Veteran

Feels very contemporary. Missing a bit of climax but is a nice composition

particle
particle
Electrobel Veteran

Thx guys! I think I'm going to let this be as it is now, it's a song for my girlfriend and she's very happy with it, and that, offcourse, matters the most to me ;)

LittleOnion
LittleOnion
Electrobel Veteran

i 'felt' this piece - thank you

EgonFisk
EgonFisk
Electrobel Veteran

well i think you have succeeded in making a very beautifull song.it's kinda better than every composition i heard on this site imho.

lebienheureux
lebienheureux
Electrobel Veteran

mmmmm very goood song for sad day.... thank you....

particle
particle
Electrobel Veteran

yup everything in reason as usual :)

Phye
Phye
Electrobel Veteran

nothin 2 say, just enjoyed ^^ like the fraseringe :p ale tbegin toch al op fraseringe te trekke ^^

Bedlam
Bedlam
Electrobel Veteran

There's just one thing, Some chords have too much tension in them, and mostly unresolved, especially in the beggining... I don't think its something you really want in a 'sad' labelled song ! Again its your taste that makes it your own so I am in no way a good critic. I am just stating my point of view. Anyway its very nice, and i dont think its finished... still need some plotting, like a story, with a nice finish, sad or good... or ongoing... like a fade out

Distreality
Distreality
Electrobel Veteran

nice