Glaubensfrage

not my kinda music for the sound...the kick needs more work, it's too fruity.... use some delayed snaredrums here and there.... alter the clap... I don't think its bad, but it does need more work imo

I agree with tha kick and the clap and the snare, it's just that I really suck at choosing rythm-sounds and allways end up with the fastest and simpliest... I'll try to change these bits! Anyone else! All help and critics are welcome! I need more of these to evolve!

It's true that the kickdrum and claps are kind of a techno standard... but maybe thats just what you wanted. Furthermore I would highen the volume of the voice a lil bit... insert a filter effect on the high sinth sounds... add more bass and dust to lower synthline starting at 2:40... well bro... that what I would do... but I'm not the pope (yet). For the rest I like the compostion and song buildup. It's good and catchy song!