hopper
ok, maybe i'm going to be over-critical, but this is my opinion. First of all, you need structure. maybe you'll say, no man, it's supposed to be loose, just a random collection of sounds and that would be fine by me, but the sounds are the most boring on the electronic planet. So make different sounds and get some kind of overarching unity in your track. Secondly, i think you need some BASS. Maybe you should leave a track on your hd for a month, listen to anthony rother, then listen to it again and see if you still want to share it with the world. sorry for the harsh critique.